Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Diction

The Color Purple Blog Number Two: Diction• “I am I have always been a good girl” (1)• “’What you setting here laughing like a fool fer?’”(15) “Who ain’t? I ast.”(14) “He walk stiff and say his teef hurt.”(35)• “Let’s make quilt pieces out of these messed up curtains, she say… I sleeps like a baby now.”(40)The first quote is one of the first lines from the novel. It introduces the main character Celie. By crossing out “I am”, Walker demonstrates Celie’s uncertainties about life and about herself. Celie does not know what she is. This creates an uncertain or even uneasy tone in the beginning of the novel. The second group of quotes are from different places in the novel. The diction that Walker uses can demonstrate the people’s ignorance and poor education. The characters in the novel use slang and improper grammar. Walker shows the social conditions and the context of the novel when she writes these things into her novel. The third quote is perhaps the most thematic. The characters take something representing desolation and hardship, “messed up curtains”, and do something productive and pleasant with them, “make quilt pieces”. With the good that comes from the bad, Celie “sleeps like a baby”. The characters make a good thing from a bad thing, and use it to have better life. Walker is showing some hope in the characters. She makes a hopeful, if only slightly, tone.

7 comments:

  1. sorry there's no breaks or anything..

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  2. With the exception of its lack of spacing, this blog is very strong. It is strong because it actually integrates the quotes into the paragraph, despite the integration not being necessary. The blog is strong also because of its large words and is overall shaped well in the essay. Something I would change about this essay is that I would suggest that you cover one specific type of diction and provide three examples to support it, rather than several quotes representing different types of diction.

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  3. I agree with your intake on the first quote of this blog that crossing out "I am" shows her insecurities. It also shows that she is scared to reveal her true feelings because she is under the watchfull eyes of everyone around her. Being a women back in that day and time was really like being under a microscope. The last quote you talked about when Walker took something that resembled struggles and turned it into something of positive. This way of writing really sets the tone for as bad as something may be it can always be turned into something good.

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  4. this was very helpful for my novel study in AP english. thank you so much!!

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